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枫下拾英 / 心情随笔 / 无题以为春风识旧络
人间来过
背井水苦乡愁挫
地上雨,全沁没
萦绕七魂终散魄
寒风萧索
何处方可纠沉错
空悲切,无困惑。
-pituoxie(皮皮);
2010-3-18
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措辞要注意旧络
乡愁挫
沁没
沉错
都属于自己发明的,读起来有些突兀
-xybca(摇曳秋风的葱);
2010-3-18
{60}
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7! ...all 辞 is 发明的 by man ...
-billni(夜星如雨);
2010-3-19
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Studying ...
-billni(夜星如雨);
2010-3-19
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