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枫下拾英 / 心情随笔 / 盼春。一场秋雨一场寒。一场春雨一场寒。赏花等到春雨后,悦柳待到秋雨前。
-go4nature(蚯蚓make$up&down);
2008-4-3
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推敲用“寻”取代“赏”,用“问”取代“悦” 是否妥当?
-go4nature(蚯蚓make$up&down);
2008-4-3
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妥
-kqc(海市);
2008-4-3
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那就是老楼写的了
-blue_bird(piggy);
2008-4-3
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如何?一场秋雨一场寒。一场春雨一场暖。开花春雨后,舞柳秋雨前。
-go4nature(蚯蚓make$up&down);
2008-4-3
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花开春雨后,柳舞秋雨前。
-pfans(曼夫子);
2008-4-3
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一场秋雨一场寒。一场春风一场暖。开花春风后,舞柳秋雨前。
-blue_bird(piggy);
2008-4-3
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一场秋雨一场寒。一场春风一场暖。花开春风后,柳舞秋雨前。
-blue_bird(piggy);
2008-4-3
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纯写景,您自己认为如何?
-tianfue(tomy);
2008-4-3
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借景言情
-blue_bird(piggy);
2008-4-3
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用”寻问“更风趣。
-go4nature(蚯蚓make$up&down);
2008-4-3
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得,偶说实话,车轱辘诗,一时感想也。流传不下来的
-tianfue(tomy);
2008-4-3
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胡扯炒股真闷烦,胡诌八扯玩儿。 留下有何用?不如当笑谈。
-go4nature(蚯蚓make$up&down);
2008-4-3
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