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枫下家园 / 望子成龙 / 7岁女儿的work
-qianwanli(千万里);
2006-10-31
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描写很细致,收入百宝箱第一文选..:)
-yihan(逸涵);
2006-10-31
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这些字拚写没错误,不知算不算好?
-qianwanli(千万里);
2006-10-31
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Her writing is excellent. Very good point " they are smarter than I thought ". You should be proud of her.......
-milly(Expecting);
2006-11-1
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谢谢你的鼓励。还有一篇。DEAD RACCOON
I saw a raccoon that was dead on the road. I think why it was dead because it was blind and looking for food for his family. Or maybe it was out taking a walk. I don’t know. Do you know why? I saw live raccoons in my backyard. They are light brown and dark brown.
-qianwanli(千万里);
2006-11-1
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配上画可以当儿童读物了,大人读着象寓言呢...昨天明明读了第1篇,说小姐姐写得很好.
-yihan(逸涵);
2006-11-1
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