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也许大侠们都去Toastmaster啦,或者去watchComedy啦。好在古狗同学还有闲,她的回答是:

-Traditional academic writing discourages the use of first or second person. This is because it does not sound objective. Instead, it sounds as though you have only a very limited, personal view of the issue you are discussing, rather than a view of the broader picture. First and second person pronouns can also make your work less concise。

-Writing in the third person allows the writer to be omniscient, to see and understand all elements and characters in the story, to show the story from more than one set of eyes. This may be as simple as including a few lines about the people left in the room after the main character exits. It may be as in-depth as showing complete scenes and events for which the main character isn’t present.
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  • 工作学习 / 外语学习 / 老师先让用地一人称写故事,然后又让用第三人称。我觉得,第一人称是感同身受。第三人称,身在外,冷眼看。 就象那二狼神的第三只眼。请问同样是写一个人,那是角度不同了吗?还是其他不同? 不是坑,是要交Assignment的。占10%的分呢。请各位大侠指教。 万分感激。
    • 嘴上感激有什么用,你先给钱,再告诉你
      • just checked my pocket, not enough for the teacher or tutor, but enough for lunch something like that. I "guanshui" many years, no "wangyou" asked for payment. the fun is priceless. please help generously.
        • 不好意思。。。怎么把你看成一个熟人了
    • 也许大侠们都去Toastmaster啦,或者去watchComedy啦。好在古狗同学还有闲,她的回答是:
      -Traditional academic writing discourages the use of first or second person. This is because it does not sound objective. Instead, it sounds as though you have only a very limited, personal view of the issue you are discussing, rather than a view of the broader picture. First and second person pronouns can also make your work less concise。

      -Writing in the third person allows the writer to be omniscient, to see and understand all elements and characters in the story, to show the story from more than one set of eyes. This may be as simple as including a few lines about the people left in the room after the main character exits. It may be as in-depth as showing complete scenes and events for which the main character isn’t present.
      • 我的理解,acdemicWriting必须用第三人称,为了Objective。小说呢,第一第二第三人称皆可,第三人称可以让writer有个多层感受,让读者了解即使主角不在时的事儿,故事或其他人物都交待的更清晰。免去了第一人称感同身受的限制。
        • 瞎猜一下哈:第一人称可以有大量心理描写 -- "老师布置完这个作业,我想这可完蛋了,不会做啊,得去 rolia 问问"。第三人称只能从人物对话/动作来刻画:“老师刚布置完作业,只见教室角落的一个人一声叹息,然后拿出上网本...” lol...