本文发表在 rolia.net 枫下论坛前天老师让他们读首诗,写个读后感, 你认为诗里最有趣的是哪些细节, 他们都做了什么. 他在纸上写到"
"西瓜里长不出鸟, 这诗很无聊, 我一点都不喜欢. 他们在胡说八道."
现在我把诗贴在这里,你们帮我想想我该怎么引导他....
Watermelon Bird
by Eric Ode
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In mid-July, my friends and I
were drinking lemonade
and eating watermelon
in the comfort of the shade.
We spat the seeds among the weeds.
We spat them east and west.
I spat one in a pine tree, where
it landed in a nest.
And there it lay till late in May,
when it sprouted as a vine,
and soon there grew a melon
in the branches of the pine.
A mother bird without a word
then settled in the tree
and nested on that melon
for a week or maybe three.
A day ago, I stood below
and heard an awful scratching:
the picking and the pecking
of that watermelon hatching.
Then very soon that afternoon,
a feathered head broke free,
and now a giant baby bird
is sitting in our tree.
He’s green and red from tail to head.
His eyes are small and gray.
He likely weighs a hundred pounds
and will not go away.
So be on guard in your backyard
when in the shade you sit.
Enjoy the watermelon,
but be careful where you spit.更多精彩文章及讨论,请光临枫下论坛 rolia.net
"西瓜里长不出鸟, 这诗很无聊, 我一点都不喜欢. 他们在胡说八道."
现在我把诗贴在这里,你们帮我想想我该怎么引导他....
Watermelon Bird
by Eric Ode
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
In mid-July, my friends and I
were drinking lemonade
and eating watermelon
in the comfort of the shade.
We spat the seeds among the weeds.
We spat them east and west.
I spat one in a pine tree, where
it landed in a nest.
And there it lay till late in May,
when it sprouted as a vine,
and soon there grew a melon
in the branches of the pine.
A mother bird without a word
then settled in the tree
and nested on that melon
for a week or maybe three.
A day ago, I stood below
and heard an awful scratching:
the picking and the pecking
of that watermelon hatching.
Then very soon that afternoon,
a feathered head broke free,
and now a giant baby bird
is sitting in our tree.
He’s green and red from tail to head.
His eyes are small and gray.
He likely weighs a hundred pounds
and will not go away.
So be on guard in your backyard
when in the shade you sit.
Enjoy the watermelon,
but be careful where you spit.更多精彩文章及讨论,请光临枫下论坛 rolia.net