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太老套了,

本文发表在 rolia.net 枫下论坛here are from ChatGPT "Here are some potential last couple sentences for a co-op student's resume:

"I am excited to bring my skills and enthusiasm to a new co-op opportunity and contribute to a dynamic and collaborative team."

"Through my co-op experiences, I have gained valuable skills in [list relevant skills], and I am eager to continue to develop and apply these skills in a new co-op position."

"I am grateful for the opportunity to have worked with [previous co-op employer], and I am confident that the experience I gained there will make me a valuable addition to any team."

"I am a highly motivated and detail-oriented individual with a strong work ethic and a passion for [relevant field]. I look forward to bringing these qualities to a new co-op role and making a meaningful contribution."

Choose the sentence that best reflects your own experiences and goals as a co-op student. Remember to proofread your resume carefully before submitting it to potential employers. Good luck!"更多精彩文章及讨论,请光临枫下论坛 rolia.net
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  • 工作学习 / 外语学习 / 请教:孩子在找coop, 求职信里最后一句:I look forward to working with you and hope to hear from you soon. 我写的话会是:I am looking forward to working for you and hope to hear from you soon. 有区别吗?
    我觉得 work for 是为你工作,更贴切一些。work with 是合作,强调了主体的平等关系。欢迎解惑。
    • 以我的理解和我会写的格式,我也赞成你孩子的写法。”Work with you “,就是一起工作的意思。无论这封回信是写给老板,经理或者是人事部,新人将来都是希望能跟他们“一起”工作,而不是专门“为“他们而工作。我觉得大家都是为“公司“而工作,而不是为了某一个人而工作。 +5

      “Work for you", 为“您”工作,我通常会用在回复顾客的。不过,不是直译地“为您工作”.例如,We will provide this service for you.

      就用的“for " .

      • 同意
        • 😁你也投赞成他的孩子
      • 受教,谢谢。我是不太自信,说谦卑也好。
        • 对,你的那种讲法是传统的文化模式的,不过,这里的文化不一样,可以直呼老板的英文名。所以,你孩子的那个思维是正确的👍,我赞成他😄。
    • 相信娃 +4
      • 谢谢。是得放手的时候了。
        • 好爸爸啊.我家我追着也就知道两面试,具体也不说了,只告诉未来有结果再知会
          • 哈哈,就是闲的。你家人中龙凤肯定没问题,我家情商待提高,也是被他爸爸折磨坏了。 +3
        • 真是个好爸爸👍其实毋须纠结一字的不同

          基本没时间读cover letter ,这种语义的细微差异很难被注意。简历写好,关键字给全更重要。

          祝小豹找coop 顺利。

          • 谢谢谬赞。会转告他秘诀。
        • 这边长大的孩子英文还要你质疑?
    • 哈哈哈,可怜天下父母心啊,扶上马,还要送一程。
      • 送不了啦,不拖马腿就好。
        • 都说work with you, 还没见过写work for you 的 +1
          • 老豹是在小豹面前班门弄斧呀
            • 谢谢,比夸我还高兴。
    • 你这该有多久没写coverletter了呀。 +2
      • 汗颜,好久了。
        • 不用汗颜,这说明你很满足现状过得很好。唯一的遗憾是容易脱节,和你的孩子不在一条船上了。崭新的世界你不懂,你孩子懂😂
    • 只有 sheldon cooper 会较真你到底是 work with him 还是 work for him... +1
    • 发给chatGPT, 让她帮你改一下就好了。
    • 小豹的” I look forward to…”是正確的寫法”,你的” I am looking forward to…”,不適合用在這類信件,至於work with,work for那個正確?得看你找的主管對下屬的態度,如果完全不認識,建議完全不寫,自薦信能寫的太多了 +2
      如果一定要寫,用joint
      • 谢谢草山兄。
    • 要么work for xxx company.
    • 你孩子写的完全正确
    • 有模版的。小孩能搞掂,放心吧!
    • 按照你的写法后面应该是and hoping,前后时态要一致
    • 小豹英文比老豹好
    • 从语言表达逻辑上看,我觉得这样更顺溜,I hope I have the opportunity to work with you and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
    • 老移民不需要对孩子的英文指点迷津。 +1
    • 再次一并感谢楼上各位。顺祝各位家庭日合家欢乐!平安幸福!! +1
    • 太老套了, +2
      本文发表在 rolia.net 枫下论坛here are from ChatGPT "Here are some potential last couple sentences for a co-op student's resume:

      "I am excited to bring my skills and enthusiasm to a new co-op opportunity and contribute to a dynamic and collaborative team."

      "Through my co-op experiences, I have gained valuable skills in [list relevant skills], and I am eager to continue to develop and apply these skills in a new co-op position."

      "I am grateful for the opportunity to have worked with [previous co-op employer], and I am confident that the experience I gained there will make me a valuable addition to any team."

      "I am a highly motivated and detail-oriented individual with a strong work ethic and a passion for [relevant field]. I look forward to bringing these qualities to a new co-op role and making a meaningful contribution."

      Choose the sentence that best reflects your own experiences and goals as a co-op student. Remember to proofread your resume carefully before submitting it to potential employers. Good luck!"更多精彩文章及讨论,请光临枫下论坛 rolia.net
      • 以后HR收到的都是千篇一律的官样文章了。
        • 错,chatgpt每次生成的是不一样的
          • 太神奇了,那老师怎么会知道学生用没用GPT呢?
            • 很多学校现在禁止chatgpt,也有chatgpt识别软件
      • 好玩,谢谢。已转犬子。
        • 多用新科技,让你儿子关注AI
          • 他儿子肯定不用我们这些老古董提醒😂
    • 记住只用 "work with you…”,要体现民主社会众生平等的优越性。😂
    • "I look forward" is formal than "I am looking forward"